-Wake up, son! Denny! Wake up!
-Sorry again Dad I can't... answered the boy,whispering.
-I'll take you to the hospital! Just hold on few minutes!
-... The boy couldn't answer, he had no more strength to say anything.
The man ran through the rain, his son in his arms. He felt desperately sorry for his son that he could not help him and that he had to make his son do painful treatments to stop the disease for a while. He had enough of this stressful situation. He drove the car furiously still the sit on the seat nest to him. When they arrived there, the doctors received them immediately under 'emergency situation'. The doctors knew that it wasn't the first time that Bruce came to the hospital for that reason. The doctors knew what to do and stopped Denny's pain immediately.
-Dad... sleepy. said Denny, still whispering without strength.
-Then sleep son. It will be all right.
The next day, Bruce went to a restaurant to take some more foods for Denny. There, he met his doctor friend Damian. They discussed long time.
-So, how...is my son going? asked Bruce, carefully.
-He's fine. You know, I've got a friend, Smith.
I think he 's the only one who can cure your son. Damian explained how he could meet Smith. Bruce thought that Damian seemed a bit concerned...
When Bruce could meet Smith, he immediately introduced himself and asked for surgery. The doctor said that Bruce won't see Denny for 4 days and asked if ti was OK. Bruce didn't want to but accepted. And didn't know why.
Few days after, Bruce received a phone call from Damian, that he wanted to meet him.
-I'm really sorry to say this...
-What? Is it about my son?
-Umm... yes.
-What is it? Tell me
-Your son is ... dead... I'm sorry Bruce...
Bruce thought he was dreaming. He couldn't believe it. He had never felt such a pain.
Even he fell off a ladder, even he got shot in the foot during military service. Even he lost his wife. The doctor, Smith killed him, because he tested his some injections on Denny. And he died because of a serious side effect.
Endings:
1. After a deep thinking for few days, Bruce decided to kill Smith. He couldn't hold his fury and sadness. He finally tracked Smith's laboratory which Bruce had to spend a month, entered there carefully. Bruce pretended to be one of those workers. Bruce quickly found Smith's office.. He entered there and throwed a knife right into Smith's left chest. He fell down. Afterwards, nobody could know where Bruce is, he just disappeared. Pelple now doesn't even know that he existed...
2.After this tragedy, Bruce felt in his dreams for few months. He ignored every works from where he worked. Now, he just became a useless person. He didn't even think about eating. It's already 2 months that Bruce had lost focus in his eyes. Simply, he became a ghost. He had no more reason to live. No family, he had nothing. Then, hanging his neck to a rope tied to the ceiling, his feet off the the floor. That's how he went across Styx that he would never come back.
3.(Same text with 1st ending to ' ...'s office'.) There Bruce's heart rate began to augmented 3 times faster. He saw his son tied up in a chair, painfully receiving an injection. He defeated every workers but didn't kill anyone. He menaced Smith with a knife and made him talk.
-I... I told your friend too lie to you. Because I thought if you knew that your son is dead, you would not try to find me.
-Why would I do that? I want to take my revenge!
-I wanted to use your son as white experiment mouse.
-Son, close your eyes.
Then Bruce killed him without hesitating.
Bruce went back home with his son. It was his happiest moment in Bruce's life.
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ReplyDeleteI read all of your creative writing.
It was creative
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